My teacher made my class write another poem but this time it’s about red! That sometimes can be exciting. This is mine.
Red looks like a battle field when war is raging on,
red sounds like the tintinnabulation of a red church.
How do you like it? My teacher is probably going to tweet it. Yes our class has a Twitter account.
Dear Caleb,
I like your metaphor. How did you link the tintinnabulation to the dictionary? That’s really cool!
From, Theo
Dear Caleb,
I agree with Theo. My favorite color is red! Its funny to me because you wrote about red and its my favorite color. Whats your favorite color? Would you mind checking out my blog? Here is the link to it.
http://myblogdaniela12.edublogs.org
Thanks!
Great blogging,
Daniela
Dear Caleb,
I like your comment.
It is cool.
From Trevor
Dear Caleb,
That is a cool post. I LOVE IT!
FROM TREVOR
Dear Caleb,
I love your post on the color red. I think you did a good job on
your whole blog. Also I like your picture of the roses.
From Talan,